Wednesday 23 January 2013

Between Two Worlds

Okay, so inspiration smacked me upside the head last night, as it can sometimes do in the early hours of the morning... Y'know, right before you go to bed, so you're kept awake by your own thoughts... I both hate and love those times. As such, Darren was born. I'm still working on New Z Land, but then I knew I just had to start writing this down before the idea flipped me the bird and wandered off into another realm, so here we go.





It was a cold Saturday evening; much colder than was usually the case for September. It was the sort of cold that was unsettling, that reached into the very depths of the human soul and reminded it of times long passed and of creatures that stalked the night, not concerned with the cold – creatures that hunted, that fed upon human flesh. It was the sort of cold that frightened people.
The snow crunched underfoot as Hannah and Ryan lazily wandered along the street from the theatre. Her chestnut hair cascaded around the shoulders of her thick winter coat, pushed back at the top of her head by a pair of pink fluffy earmuffs. She glanced behind at the trail of footsteps they had left behind them, at how much larger his footprints were than hers. She smiled and looked at Ryan, the moonlight glancing off of his raincoat and deepening its already dark green colour. His hair was tucked away neatly in a dark grey beanie cap and his pale blue eyes moved to observe her.  They were content with each other’s company, not showing any reaction to the cold other than the cloud of their breath upon the air. Ryan draped his arm around her shoulders like a shawl and held her close. They shared a joke and Hannah’s laughter filled the empty street with a warmth otherwise distant from the frosty September night.

Ryan noticed a crunch of snow out of synch with their own footsteps and he stopped, holding Hannah closer to his own chest as he looked around.

The street around them was empty. Only the distant sound of traffic could be heard. There wasn’t a single visible soul with them on the street.

“What is it, why did you stop?” Hannah asked, glancing at him nervously.

“It’s nothing. I thought I heard something...” He smiled and squeezed her to try and ease her tensions before slowly walking once more. Ryan tried to shake the thought out of his mind that he could still hear the third set of footsteps. Ryan convinced himself that it was the sound simply echoing in the sidestreets and alleyways and playing tricks on his mind. Sure, that was it, he reassured himself.

Hannah and Ryan never saw the beast that attacked them. They never saw the long, razor sharp claws that cut through cloth and flesh alike. Hannah and Ryan felt no pain as they fell to the floor, their bodies already in shock. As their eyes began to dim and their world sank into darkness, they finally noticed how cold it was. Hannah and Ryan convulsed as their life oozed from them, soaking through the snow, staining it black under the moonlight; part shiver, part death spasm. As the last few dregs of consciousness slipped from their bodies, Hannah and Ryan saw a shadow loom over them – they saw eyes like embers shimmering through the darkness above them as a mouth all too wide and with too many teeth shifted into a malicious, hungry grin that caught the moonlight reflecting from the snow. Perhaps it was the delirium of the cold and their dying haze, but Hannah and Ryan saw as an inhuman tongue lashed from the gaping maw and licked their dark blood from its claws, a piercing clicking noise uttering from the beast’s throat.

The shadow was mocking their final moments; mocking and watching, savouring its kill as much as it seemed to savour the taste of their blood...

***

“Damn it all, Grace! Why don’t you warn me coming onto a scene like this?” Darren covered his mouth and held back a gag in the depths of his chest and throat as he observed the two corpses on the sidewalk, already beginning to take on a shade of blue from being left in the cold all night. A fresh fall of snow had clung to the bodies and the forensics team had already begun dusting away the excess to reach the lower layers that had been stained by the victims’ blood. Tatters of clothing dotted the scene, as did slivers and chunks of flesh where the bodies had been ripped apart. Darren noted a distinct lack of blood around some of the portions of person littering the snow.

“Sorry, D, I didn’t want to spoil the surprise.” Grace DeLance, an officer of the Detroit police’s homicide department, looked to Darren with an amused twinkle in her hazel eyes. Morgue humour... Darren had come to expect no less from Detroit PD’s rising star. It was a natural human coping mechanism, and one that she had developed to a fine art.

“Yeah, well, I don’t want to spoil my lunch...” Darren glanced around once more, noticing the earmuffs next to the woman’s corpse, once pink, once fluffy, now thick and sticky with deep red blood, no doubt hers and her partner’s, “Unlike whatever killed these two...”

Grace tilted a brow and narrowed her eyes at him, “Come again?”

She hadn’t noticed. Darren smiled.

“These portions of flesh here, here and here,” he gestured, one hand still over his mouth, “There’s no blood around them. They were cut from the corpses post-mortem, post exsanguination.” He crouched by the male body and squinted, “Also, they don’t match the wounds exactly; there are parts missing, meaning either whatever killed these poor bastards had its own buffet, or took souvenirs...”

Darren stood and stretched, taking a deep breath through his mouth before looking at the forensics team busying themselves around the crime scene.

“Call them off.” Darren said, turning his attention back to Grace.

“What?”

“You heard. They won’t find anything.”

Grace pouted. She suited pouting, Darren thought.

“What do you mean we won’t find anything?”

Darren moved a hand around, as if drawing a circle around the scene with his mind, “The snow. Whatever prints or other such markings on the bodies or around the area would have been washed away with the melting snow and then covered over with the fresh fallen stuff on top of that.”

The fact that Darren already knew that whatever had done this wouldn’t leave any marks of identification was probably a little beyond Grace’s level of understanding, for the moment. He knew he’d have to level with her eventually, but for now, he just told her the things she needed to know.

“If there’s anything else, Officer DeLance, you have my number. I’ll follow up some leads, chase down some contacts, see what I can find out,” Darren pushed back the hem of his white leather jacket and stuffed his hands into the pockets of his faded stonewash jeans. The wind caught his ruddy blonde hair and blew it out of his face. Grace DeLance caught sight of her reflection in the silver lenses of Darren’s aviator sunglasses and sighed.

“Fine, I’ll call you, Mr. Riley, but if you find something first, you’re to come straight to me.”

“I will...” He wouldn’t...

Darren glanced to the sky, the sun pale as it shone through the frosty sky. Something had broken from the Join, and he knew he was the only one capable of hunting it. So much for lazy Sundays, he mused...


Yeah, still on my Dresden Files vibe. I'm really getting excited by Darren and can't wait to introduce you to more of his world(s... Hint hint. Spoiler?) 

But for now, God bless and much love.
Adios!
Craiggy.

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