Saturday 24 August 2013

The New World - It's good to be back!

Wow. I don't even have a reason for not updating anything on here. I could give you a full list of things, such as my old laptop dying and me losing a good number of files and stories in progress (Which I am not happy about, but life goes on, and most of it is on here already) but honestly, I just haven't felt the inclination to write as of late. My head has, as always, been brimming with ideas, but I've just not found the motivation to write them down with my life being in quite a hectic state at the moment, being super busy with work and whatnot, but hey, I've written something! That's a start, right?

Hope you enjoy it. Feedback appreciated as always!!


There was no illumination within the room save for the dull, flickering ambience of the humming computer monitor and the few strands of sunlight defiantly invading through the gaps of the heavy curtains that illuminated the flecks of dust lingering and dancing in the air.

Anthony heaved a sigh as he stared absently at the screen in front of him. Several short beeps interrupted each other as he received messages from various people who the social networking websites referred to as ‘friends’.

With his usual hazy nonchalance he raised his glass and sipped at the beer that had long since acclimatised to room temperature, not that he noticed or cared. He flicked through the message windows and clicked his fingers across the keyboard with an effortless glide.

Tedium. That was all Anthony found his life had become as of late; tedium and stagnation. He ran a hand through his mop of chestnut hair and across the stubble forming across his cheeks. Idly he pondered when the last time he’d shaved had been as he opened the last message window.

Anthony blinked as he looked closer at the screen. There was just a series of squares instead of a username, like when a computer tries to read a font or language that it doesn’t have installed and the profile picture was a blurred silhouetted head of neutral gender. He squinted as he read the message;

“Traveller. You are not satisfied with this existence – with this world in which you are alive. Do you call yourself alive; can you call yourself truly ‘alive’?
There is a world, contrary to your own. There is a world in which your existence, your life can be renewed with purpose and vigour…”

Anthony took another sip of his beer, now noticing its disappointing warmth. He grimaced as he set his glass down and continued to read.

“Join us. Join the New World. Become your true self, your new self. Embrace purpose. Embrace life.”

The message was signed with a hyperlink in the same unreadable squares. Anthony shrugged and closed the message under the assumption that this was just another invite to just another online game that he would no doubt play, find entertaining for the first week and then grow as inevitably bored as he’d done with the countless previous games he’d played.


The shafts of light through his curtains had faded and the glow of the streetlights had taken their place in adding the dreary ambience within Anthony’s room. With a laboured heave he stood and shut down his computer. He fell into his bed and stared blankly at the ceiling. He didn’t take notice of the clock and had no knowledge of the time he actually fell asleep. All that circled his mind was that one question: Could he call himself alive?


I really want to see where this goes, so hopefully I'll have some more for you soon, maybe even tomorrow as I definitely want to get back into a writing routine!

Peace out for now!
Craiggy.