The skinhead
shrugged and spat on the floor, “Small talk. Conversation. Guess it’s wasted on
you military types...”
Wren rolled
his neck. It popped twice.
“Fine,
what’s your name then, soldier boy?”
“Wren...”
“Like the
bird? Like a bloody Sparrow?”
Wren smirked
and shrugged, “Yeah, like a Sparrow. What about you?”
The thug sat
upright, his chest puffing out like a toad’s. Wren could see the muscle fibres
underneath the thug’s vest tense up. He assumed the skinhead had had some
augmetic work done to enhance them.
“You can
call me Tanner.”
“Is that
your real name, Tanner?”
“What’s it
matter?”
Wren
shrugged, “The way I figure it, if we’re going to be fighting for our lives on
some God-forsaken island prison, I want to at least know the names of the
people who might save my life, or whose I might have to end...”
Tanner
grinned. He was missing three teeth, “Like I said, you can call me Tanner.”
The man sat
next to Wren gave a snort and adjusted his thin rimmed spectacles before
folding his slender arms across his chest.
“Oh, and
what’s so funny, Four-eyes?” Tanner glanced and noticed the man’s dog tags, the
same as Wren’s, “You two Squaddies or something?”
The thin,
spectacled man said nothing; he didn’t so much as even raise an eyebrow to
Tanner’s inquiry. Wren simply chuckled.
“Oh what’s
so funny then, little Sparrow?”
Wren
stretched his arms behind his head, feeling the clasps of his cuffs dig into
the base of his skull. It gave him a sense of cold reassurance of his fate,
“Davies won’t answer you.”
“Why? He
mute or something?”
Wren looked
to Davies. He looked back with an arched, inquisitive eyebrow and an air of
confidence before closing his eyes and turning to face the floor once more.
“No. He’s
not mute. He just has a rule; he won’t talk to people he thinks he can kill...”
Wren turned again, “Isn’t that right Davies?”
Davies
remained silent.
Wren
chuckled and looked back to Tanner, “Y’see, the thing with Davies is, he bloody
thinks he can kill every sod he’s ever met... Truth is, I bloody believe him
too.”
So there you go. My resident silent badass, Davies.
Enjoy!
Craiggy.
I'm impressed. You can really write! And you're under 40 yet you know about punctuation.
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